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Talk:Japanese M15 home video distribution announced

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Revision as of 16:40, 18 October 2012 by Fenyx4 (talk | contribs) (Added mention of two possible sentence fragments present in article.)
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From my perspective, there appears to be two sentence fragments present in the article:

The Blu-ray Disc version to be available on sale for ¥ 5,229 (Yen). While the price for its DVD version has been set at ¥ 4,179 (Yen).

Shouldn't the sentence read similarly to the following edit?:

The Blu-ray Disc version is to be available on sale for ¥ 5,229 (Yen), while the price for its DVD version has been set at ¥ 4,179 (Yen).

It would be appreciated if other editors/users could submit input on this issue. Thanks in advance. Fenyx4 (talk) 16:40, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

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